Monday, August 02, 2004

waterfall

waterfall

i'm falling inside,
gushing like a waterfall,
topple with cloudy images.

by the moonlight and sunlight,
i still can't unveil,
i still can't catch the light.

i've gone to the tor,
went to the valley,
all i see is my misty self.

i can't seem to hold on to the cliff,
as all i see is my self falling,
down to the hasty waterfall.

in the waterfall it feels like tornado,
my stomach was topsy-turvy,
my heart just split away for once.

i felt my mind loitering,
tangled with tears and laughter,
am i over?


2 Comments:

Blogger Michelle J Brohier said...

I think there's one spelling mistake... but no matter. This isn't bad, too! Good use of words, but I believe you could do better.

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