rumble tumble
rumble tumble
i feel a little rattling,
yet a little breezy,
a little rough and a little dizzy.
my heart felt a little stretched,
yet so tight,
like a little bottle filled with sand.
i am viewing at a whole,
yet seeing a quarter,
and feeling a little.
i feel a little rattling,
yet a little breezy,
a little rough and a little dizzy.
my heart felt a little stretched,
yet so tight,
like a little bottle filled with sand.
i am viewing at a whole,
yet seeing a quarter,
and feeling a little.
posted by Melyong at 6:22 PM
2 Comments:
You've got your images mixed up. Try to fix it a little, search in your heart a little more for the proper words. But I like your last stanza, anyway.
Hi! Great poems you got there :)
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