water
you Drip in my life each and everyday,
without realizing you've formed Crystal in my life,
first were soft and powdery,
just like a sprinkle of flour,
easily smudge and smear,
dusted you away,
but you would stay.
each day you Drip in more and more,
till a fully formed and ever growing,
glow in the dark and sparkle in light,
just like a crystal that is so precious,
a Crystal in me,
like water you will flow.
but now stopped growing,
leaving me a beautiful crystal,
that will never grow again.
no more Drips in me,
no more growth to my precious,
no more glow to your glory.
I did let you Drip in me long ago,
and look now,
only a sharp black Rock,
a Rock that has block my breath.
Rock in me,
a Rock that is blocking my breath,
stopped my beats,
and flow sand in me.
you stopped to buy me a storage,
are you happy already?
you've achieved it,
I didn't ignore you,
but Thought told me you were just Dripping,
like any other,
coz you just Drip but never Tap,
I tried to let you grow,
only to come home raining.
where is the Drip?
have you disappear?
or are you Dripping else where?
well you just transformed,
didn't you?
to something new.
no more Drip, no more Crystal,
is this a doing of Thought?
or is this fate?
or maybe it's just Life in Water...
you Drip in my life each and everyday,
without realizing you've formed Crystal in my life,
first were soft and powdery,
just like a sprinkle of flour,
easily smudge and smear,
dusted you away,
but you would stay.
each day you Drip in more and more,
till a fully formed and ever growing,
glow in the dark and sparkle in light,
just like a crystal that is so precious,
a Crystal in me,
like water you will flow.
but now stopped growing,
leaving me a beautiful crystal,
that will never grow again.
no more Drips in me,
no more growth to my precious,
no more glow to your glory.
I did let you Drip in me long ago,
and look now,
only a sharp black Rock,
a Rock that has block my breath.
Rock in me,
a Rock that is blocking my breath,
stopped my beats,
and flow sand in me.
you stopped to buy me a storage,
are you happy already?
you've achieved it,
I didn't ignore you,
but Thought told me you were just Dripping,
like any other,
coz you just Drip but never Tap,
I tried to let you grow,
only to come home raining.
where is the Drip?
have you disappear?
or are you Dripping else where?
well you just transformed,
didn't you?
to something new.
no more Drip, no more Crystal,
is this a doing of Thought?
or is this fate?
or maybe it's just Life in Water...
1 Comments:
Nice... but you could use a lot of help on this poem. There are too many mistakes to make this poem truly enjoyable. If you want, I'll try to change things here and there for you... of course, if you let me. After all, there could be hidden meanings as to why you wrote it that way. But allow me to help... >.<
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