Sunday, January 30, 2005

this feeling

it makes you smile and cry at the same time,
just like a tidal wave it swallows,
it take you to another world,
of swirls and slides,
just like a fantasy,
but it's true,
it shines at this moment,
and black out the next,
what a funny little thing,
a strange little feeling,
but it is true,
and it can give you a minute of hope,
and also a life-time of crushing,
just a little feeling of great consequences.

2 Comments:

Blogger Shanahan said...

Hey. This is a cool poem. really really heart felt.
I wish you hadn't used the word "pesky" though. The mood become turned there. But I love it, as I do all your works!

6:04 AM  
Blogger Michelle J Brohier said...

I love it. Simple words that portray and overall feeling is something we all can understand, thus making it even easier to relate to. Nice!

9:31 AM  

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