Friday, April 15, 2005

awaiting victory

eventhough we live and die,
come and go,
i have never regret upon your presence,
yet never despite your leaving,
instead misses our presence,
therefore i sank those time,
but not dispose them,
i will lead on to the path,
like a champion,
you've always said,
'till we meet again,
then we will sail the ship that once sank,
and claim our victory,
for us...

1 Comments:

Blogger Michelle J Brohier said...

I can feel your earnest feelings in this poem, but your words are a little jumbled up.

I think if edited, this would be a very nice poem. ^.^

6:06 PM  

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